2/10 individual essay feedback

I got the feedback on my individual essay today. Luckily there weren't any huge mistakes; I only had some small mistakes such as having only two thesis statements and lacking some key points for the summary. There were only two thesis statements because I thought the problems with the desks and chairs were the same so I thought I could put them together. On the other hand, I didn't realize that I only had one key point mentioned in the summary part. I'm regretting that because I should have realized it and fixed it before handing it in.  Overall, I thought that it wasn't bad. From now on, I will continue to improve my slides and brochure with my teammates.

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